The fundamental
issues in America today are centered on our poor economic situation. Obama
acknowledged the long road we have faced since his time as a Senator, but
asserted that our problems can be solved.
"The first
time I addressed this convention in 2004, I was a younger man; a Senate
candidate from Illinois who spoke about hope -- not blind optimism or wishful
thinking, but hope in the face of difficulty; hope in the face of uncertainty;
that dogged faith in the future which has pushed this nation forward, even when
the odds are great; even when the road is long..."
"But know
this, America: Our problems can be solved. Our challenges can be met. The path
we offer may be harder, but it leads to a better place. And I'm asking you to
choose that future. ..."
Obama created a sense of hope in his audience through the proposal of a
relatively concrete plan for the next four years, but it was obvious that he
did not directly reference the Obama Healthcare Plan. This, as well as the
stimulus, was not touched on in Obama’s speech, as it is controversial among
voters according to opinion polls. What Obama stressed was the need for concession
in democracy: “No democracy works without compromise."
Four successes that
Obama referenced in his speech seemed relatively invalid. He touched on the
increase of domestic energy; withdrawal of troops from Iraq; decrease in the
cost of education; and reduction in the country’s deficit.
When Obama spoke to
the increase of domestic energy, his facts were fallacious, according to The
Daily Beast. While he claims that we cut oil imports by one million barrels
a day, an independent analysis noted during a Congressional appearance in May
2012, that crude oil production on federal lands actually fell 14 percent in
2011. Natural gas was also calculated to have dropped 9 percent over the same
2011 period. Much of the increase of oil production has come from private
companies. The decrease in oil import could likely be attributed to the poor
economic situation of many Americans. Obama’s assertion about the decrease in
our reliance on foreign oil and the need to utilize the resources of our nation
is not a responsible proposal. This will create many environmental crises in
our nation and cannot be managed in a responsible or environmentally conscious
manner.
“Four years ago I promised to end the war in Iraq. We did.” – Obama
Though Obama
was commander-in-chief during the withdrawal of troops from Iraq, the date on
which drawback of American soldiers would be carried through was predetermined
according to the Status Forces Agreement signed by George W. Bush in December
of 2008.
According to
the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau, education debt of American students
exceeded $1 trillion in March of 2012. Though Obama claims that college loan
reforms have helped college students save, the cost of a four-year college
education increased 15 percent from 2008 to 2010.
Obama also spoke
about a plan that would cut the United States deficit by $4 trillion. This
proposed plan is, in actuality, includes the $1 trillion in federal cuts that
are already being considered, as well as billions of dollars that will no
longer be spent due to our lesser involvement in Iraq and Afghanistan. His
proposal is not an accurate representation of his potential to introduce more
cuts if granted a second term in office.
While Obama’s
speech proposed a relatively promising plan for his next term in office, many
of his claims have been proven invalid or stretched. Unfortunately, Obama is
not responsible for many of the upturns in our national state-of-being. It’s
lucky for him that his morals and commitment to the well-being of all American
citizens are crucial in this next election.
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